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Writing the Research Paper
A Brunswick High School Guide
 
 
Introduction
Writing a research paper is a complex process with a number of steps that must be completed.  While there may be specific individual teacher requirements for any given research paper, many elements are standard. 

 Every research paper needs a clear organizational plan, and content generated from outside sources.  Every research paper needs documentation to avoid plagiarizing other people’s ideas.  Each source used and cited in the paper must be included in the Works Cited page, and bibliographic information must be presented in the correct format. 

 Some research papers will require a student-generated thesis, some a detailed outline, and some various note-taking strategies; information on each topic is included in the booklet, but may not be necessary for every research paper assigned by every teacher 
 


Generating a 
Thesis and Topics
A thesis is a single statement that directs your entire paper. 
 
If you are writing a paper on a work of literature, your thesis must say something about that work of literature, something that both you and authoritative sources see in that particular work. 
 
Your thesis could address the manner in which the work approaches courage, family, prejudice, heroism, individuality, revenge, friendship, society, or some other idea about human behavior. 
 
Your thesis could focus on the author’s use or development of some element of fiction, such as characters, plot, or setting. 
Your thesis could also address some aspect of this particular work that is unique, whether it be tone, style, or the presentation of an unusual idea. 
 
It is crucial that your thesis actually says something about the work, and about the topic you have chosen as your focus; you cannot say simply that people in a certain work have close family relationships, when that is a fact.  You could say that close family relationships help them survive in a cruel world, or that even though they seem to have close family relationships, they really don’t. 
 
Once you have a thesis, you need to decide how you will break your information down into supporting topics for your body paragraphs. 
 
 Topics should not follow the  chronological order of the work, nor should they overlap. It is helpful if your topics all fit into the same pattern by having a common denominator: if they ar three reasons, or causes, or results, or aspects or types of something related to your thesis. 
 
Creating an Outline
 I. Write the thesis at the top of the outline 

 II. Use the correct numbers and letters for main points 
     and subpoints 
     A. Roman numberals for main points or topics 
     B. Capital letters for subpoints 
     C. Numbers and lower-case letters for more information 
          1. details 
          2.  further elaboration 

 III. Indent each division of the outline 
     A. Roman numerals occur at the left margin 
     B. Place the letter or number directly under the first word 
          of the larger heading above it 

  IV. Do not use a single subheading 
     A. Do not bread down a heading unless it can be divided 
          into at least two points 
          1.  If there is an A, there must be a B 
          2.  If there is a 1, there must be a 2 
               a.  These points can be broken down as well 
               b.  Just make sure there is a b to go with an a 
       B. If the heading cannot be broken down into two 
          subheadings, use a dash to divide the ideas—like this 

 V. Punctuation and capitalization 
     A.  Begin each item with a capital letter 
     B.  Do not use end punctuation 
 


Outline Example
Female characters in F. Scott Fitgerald’s The Great Gatsby use subtle rather than direct means to achieve their goals. 

I. Daisy manipulates men with her beauty and lovely voice 
     A. First meeting with Gatsby 
          1.  Beautiful and sought after 
          2.  Voice has the sound of money 
          3.  Deceived by her “subterfuge” 
     B. First meeting with Nick 
          1.  Tells him he is a “rose” 
          2.  Uses meaningless words with dramatic intonation 
     C. Marriage with Tom 
          1.  Decorative object in the house 
          2.  Implied in fried chicken scene 
 
II. Jordan is dishonest is her dealings with people 
     A. Golf ball incident 
     B.  Nick’s experiences 
          1.  Listening in at the door 
          2.  Unconcerned with lies 
     C. Accident prone 
          1.  Doesn’t worry about other points of view 
          2.  Tries to use others to protect herself—auto example 

 III. Muriel uses beauty and energy to achieve her ends 
     A. Marries someone she believes is well-off 
          1.  He feels lucky to get her 
          2.  She “catches” him 
     B. Affair with Tom is based on physical appearace and energy 
         1.  Nick’s description of vitality 
         2.  Dressing up in New York 
         3.  Disappearing into bedroom 
     C. Nothing deeper connecting her to men 
          1.  Tom striking her at the mention of Daisy 
          2.  Husband locking her up until he can take her away 
 


Taking Notes
Summary: 
The primary purpose of the summary is informational; you should write down all significant facts.  You may change the information around, and use phrases instead of complete sentences on your note cards.  You must footnote this material 

Precis: 
This special type of summary keeps the order of the original, and is written in complete sentences, in formal English.  It may leave out examples and adjectives, as well as other words and phrases.  The tone of the original is retained, while its length is reduced to about 1/4 to 1/3 of the original.  You must footnote this material. 

Paraphrase: 
The paraphrase will be about the same length as the original, and will keep interesting words and phrases from the original.  The writing style and point-of-view should be yours, but because you are using other people’s ideas, this material still needs to be footnoted. 

Direct Quotation: 
 Direct quotations should be used to relate unusually important material and controversial ideas.   They are also used when the wording of the original is unusually eloquent or striking.  Quoted material must match the original in wording, spelling, capitalization and punctuation.  You must footnote this material. 
 


Documentation
 Internal citations, using line notes, and a Works Cited page identify the book and page from which you extracted the information presented in your paper.  You must document everything except your own ideas and explanations.  Not only are direct quotes, facts and dates followed by line notes, but also any information you have summarized and put in your own words.  Usually an author’s last name and the page number on which the information was found are acceptable for the line note: 

 Medieval Europe was a place of “raids, pillages, slavery and extortion” and of “traveling merchants, small towns and active farm markets” (Towsen 12). 

This information came from a book with one author; please note the correct punctuation.  Other possibilities: 

* No author is given:  Use the article title or, if there is no article title,use the book title: 
 
  (“Queen Victoria” 173) or 
  (American History 432) 
 

* Two books you are using have the same author:  Use the book title to distinguish between sources: 

  (Smith, American History 432) and 
   (Smith, Civil War 211) 

* Two articles you are using have the same titles and no author:  Use the book title to distinguish between sources: 

  (“Charles Dickens,” Famous Authors 3) and 
  (“Charles Dickens,” Discovering Authors 298) 
 


M.L.A. Style
for Works Cited
Book with one author: 
Gardner, Harriet.  The Shattered Mind.  New York:  Knopf, 1975. 

Book with two or more authors: 
 Hammond, John, Eric Donnelly, and Nancy Rayner. 
  Woodworking Technology.  Boston:  McKnight, 1980. 

Book with no author: 
 A Day in the Life of the Soviet Union.  New York:  Collins, 1987. 

Book with editor and no author: 
 Bottomore, Thomas, ed.  A History of Sociological Analysis. 
  New York:  Basic, 1978. 

Book with an organization or group as the author: 
 American Medical Association.  The American Medical 
  Association Encyclopedia of Medicine.  New York:     Random, 1989. 

Encyclopedias: 
 Odell, Daniel K.  “Dolphin.”  World Book Encyclopedia.  1995. 

 “Denmark.”  The New Encyclopedia Britannica.  15th ed.  1995. 

Signed article or shapter in an edited book or multivolume work
 Kenner, Hugh.  “Sincerity Kills.”  Sylvia Plath.  Ed. Harold Bloom. 
  Modern Critical Views.  New York:  Chelsea House, 
  1989.  67-78. 

An introduction, preface, foreword or afterword: 
 Kincaid, James R.  Introduction.  Lewis Carroll’s Alice’s 
   Adventures in Wonderland.  By Lewis Carroll.  New 
  York:  Harcourt Brace Jovanovich, 1982.  7-11. 

Book in a series: 
 Fertazzo, Paul J.  Emily Dickinson.  Twayne’s United States 
  Authors ser. 280.  Boston:  Twayne, 1976. 

Magazine articles: 
 Gallo, Nick.  “The Agony of Alzheimers.”  Better 
  Homes and Gardens.  July 1995.  60-63. 

 “What’s in an Internet Name?”  Forturne 16 Oct. 1995.  38+. 
 
S.I.R.S.  Article from Binders: 
 Gilman, Ray.  “No simple answers.”  Context. Spring 
  1992.  10-13.  POPULATION.  Ed. Eleanor Goldstein.     Vol. 5.  Boca Raton:  SIRS.  1992.  Art. 44. 

Newspaper: 
 “U.S. Companies Shouldn’t Fight Cleaner Air Standards.” 
  Detroit Free Press.  31 Oct. 1991. A:10. 

Interview: 
 Gingrich, Newt.  Interview with Ted Koppel. Nightline.  ABC.    WMAR.  Baltimore.  7 Oct. 1994. 

S.I.R.S. article from CD-ROM: 
 Trebilcock, Barry.  “The New High Kids Crave.”  Redbook. 
  March 1993.  76+.  SIRS Researcher.  CD-ROM. 
  SIRS.  Winter 1995. 

Infotrac: 
 Duesberg, Peter H.  “Results Fall Short for HIV Theory.” 
   Insight on the News.  14 Feb. 1994.  24-27.  Infotrac: 
  SuperTOM+. CD-ROM.  Information Access. 
  Jan. 1996. 

Grolier Encyclopedia on CD-ROM: 
 Cave Alfred.  “Andrew Jackson.”  The New Grolier Multmedia 
  Encyclopedia.  CD-ROM.  Danbury, CT:  Grolier, Inc., 
  1994. 

World Wide Web: 
 Yule, James.  The Cold War Revisited:  A Splintered Germany. 
  Online.  Internet.  5 Mar. 1996.  Available 
  http://use.coldwar.server.gov/index/cold.war/countries/ 
  former.soviet.block/Germany/germany/html 

Email: 
 Samson, Alma.  “Info on Chinese Art.”  Email to Tom Allen. 
  14 Oct. 1995. 
 


Works Cited
Child, Harold.  “Jane Austen.”  The Cambridge History of the   English Language.  London:  Cambridge University Press, 
 1990.  86-90. 

“Mandarin.”  The Encyclopedia Americana.  1993 ed. 

Paredes, Americo and Raymond Paredes.  Mexican American 
 Authors.  Boston:  Houghton, 1973. 

Prizker, Thomas.  “An Early Look at the Cure.”  Online. Ingress 
 Communications. 
 Available:  http://www.ingress.com/~astanart/pritzker.html. 
 8 June 1995. 

Scotto, Peter.  “Censorship, Reading and Interpretation:  A Case 
 Study from the Soviet  Union.”  Time 28 Feb.  1994:  13-14. 

Smith, Edward, ed.  A Look at Ralph Waldo Emerson.  Chicago: 
 Untica Press, 1987. 

Taylor, Paul.  “Keyboard Grief:  Coping with Comupter-Caused 
 Injuries.”  Wall Street Journal 1 Apr. 1994:  A1+. 

“Thoreau, Henry David.”  Encyclopedia of Authors.  Ed. William 
 Jones and Carl Sagan.   London:  Britannica, 1988. 
 


Typing the
Final Draft
  1. Use a standard 12 point font.  Do not use script or fancy fonts for papers.
  2. Double space the entire paper, including the Works Cited page.
  3. Margins should be 1 inch at the top and bottom, and left and right.
  4. Indent five spaces at the beginning of each paragraph.
  5. Leave two spaces after periods, question marks or exclamation points; leave one space after commas.Arrange the information on the Title Page so that it is balanced and looks nice.  Center the title about one-third down on the page; do not underline your own title.  Space down a few lines and type your name.  Near the bottom of the page, type your instructor’s name, the course name and the date.
  6. If a formal outline is required, this follows the title page.  Type the title of your paper at the top of your outline, and triple space before you type the rest of your outline.
  7. Type the title again on the first page of your paper; triple space before you type the first line of your paper.
  8. Number the pages of your paper in the upper-right corner.  Do not number the first page; begin with page 2 of your paper.
  9. When you are finished typing, proofread every page carefully; do not trust spell-check to catch all your errors! 

Sample Passage
     Daisy cannot get what she wants by direct means, so she must use delicate approaches instead.  When Gatsby first meets her, he is entranced by her voice, which hints at “bedrooms more rich and beautiful and cool than other bedrooms” (Fitzgerald 146), showing that he associates her voice and manner with her luxurious existence.  Her outward attractions—appearance and voice—win his heart, and he spends the next five years struggling to earn the money that Daisy will require.  Daisy, however, is not content to wait, and accepts Tom’s offer instead.  Daisy cannot work and earn her own money, but feels the need for “a rich cocoon of protective layer, buffering her from the harsh realities of life” (Hale 23).  When Nick meets her in New York, she is spread out on the couch like a decorative display, her primary function in life.  When her husband is gone from the room, she calls Nick “a rose, an absolute rose” (Fitzgerald 15).  She is employing the same means to win Nick’s favor that she has used to achieve her position in life—picture and sound.  Daisy needs the “charm and grace that wealth provide” (Matlock 273),  but her position as a woman can only lead her there through the favor of powerful males; therefore, she works for what she needs, but with her charms, not her hands.  As Thomas Aquinas says, “‘Daisy’s role in life is to absorb the gifts and adoration of those around her; she is like a small child that wants to be the focus of attention, but makes no contribution other than the cry of “Look at me!”’ “(Aquinas 6).  What Aquinas does not necessarily acknowledge, is that this is the only contribution possible for a woman in Daisy’s position. 



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